One reviewer wrote: “Humorous and entertaining with some action and drama. An overwhelming amount of characters to keep up with but worth it.”
Another wrote: “This story is a case of too much all at once, too many characters, too many species descriptions, and too much internal dialog.”
This is the second book in the series, and I should have kept it simple rather than go all Games of Thrones style. To be honest, even I had a hard time keeping up with all his characters.
Because of my advanced reviews, I don’t want to lose my readers to something I can fix here.
I take all my reviews seriously. I love feedback even when it hurts. But since I can’t change anything now that the books will publish in less than twenty-four hours, here is my effort to make Unexpected Demon a little less painful.
I’ve decided to list out all the main / major players in the Unexpected Series. That way you can acquaint yourself with the characters.
Captain Rannn: despite his title he is rather young for his responsibilities. He climbed the ranks fast and is the youngest captain at 120 years old. For a race (Yunkin) that lives to be 350 years old, he’s looking pretty good – minus the long scare down the left side of his face.
Rannn is best described as: A ethical bulldozer.
Pax: he’s big, strong and loves bringing a little humor to bad situations. He’s good friends with the captain and is loyal as hell. He’s a 119 years old Red Demon and he loves whiskey.
Pax is best described as: A fun guy you’d meet at the bar who’d regal you with war stories.
Yon: he’s spent his 153 years focused on being the best. Because of his intense drive, he has limited patience for stupidity and his rough personality makes it hard for people to want to be around him – except Rannn, Pax and Ansel. He’s a half breed between a Red Demon and Yunkin.
Yon is best described as: The guy who everyone ignores in the office until shit hits the fan and everyone is looking for his help.
Ansel: A brilliant doctor with a soft touch. If there isn’t a cure, he will make one. He’s curious and always tinkering with something. A Numan by birth, with a heart of gold.
Ansel is best described as: A clever soft spoken man with “just the thing to help”.
Sci: this guy is my all-time favorite. I could write pages on him – actually I did. I wrote an entire book. He’s a Cerebral with telekinetic and telepathic abilities. He’s the Ace up the Captain’s sleeve in every event and yet he’s not arrogant or smug about how much everyone needs him. He’s simply living his life with his wife Sasha, who is a member of the crew – so he helps when needed, but in the end, Sasha always comes first.
Sci is best described as: The helpful bystander.
Sands: is a mechanic that has one cybernetic arm, and metal plates in his jaw. He’s works practically around the clock and other few hours he’s trying to keep others out of his workspace. He’s sarcastic and annoyed at most things. As a non-federation cyborg he has abilities that no one else knows about, and he uses them without regard to ethics.
Sands is best described as: the guy most likely to get in an argument with as well as fantasize about. He’s the kind of guy who eats junk food and whole pizzas while maintaining rock hard arms and washboard abs.
Sasha: is an aviation prodigy. She’s been gifted with quick hands and sharp mind. She loves to go fast and see new places. She is used most on scouting missions with her husband Sci to collect as much data about a planet without having to engage.
Sasha is best described as: the crazy girl you once knew.
Clalls: A hybrid Night Demon who enjoys hacking into your life to find your most secret desires and then blackmailing you.
Vivra: A dedicated worker with more contacts that a mob boss.
Shady: A strict rule follower who will challenge anyone, no matter their rank, if they are not following the rules.
Yelena: A rescued slave from Brica. Her skin glows and she’s painfully shy with everyone but Vivra.
Lita: A mechanical prodigy from Puerto Rico, USA – EARTH. Downright untrustworthy because she’s got a wickedly dark sense of humor.
Nue: A prisoner Clalls saved from Debsa, the Federation’s prison planet. Clalls forged a few things and got her on the ship as a favor to Nova. Nue is a skilled astronomer who has brilliant insight into space Navigation and uncharted territories specifically the Outworlds.
Admiral Orin: he is Captain Rannn’s boss in a manner of speaking. But my readers know who really runs the show between them.
Veeda: Numan who experiments on anyone she can get her hands on for her next biological enhancements.
Fynbar: Numan who experiments on anyone to test his cybernetics.
Calum: Numan who experiments with infectious diseases and tests them on anyone he can kidnap. And sometimes whole planets.
Jaccy: A Celee who crushes anyone who gets in the way of his agenda.
Chollar: he is Sci’s brother. Sci is currently looking for him.
Jandy: she is Sasha’s best friend on her home world. She was sold before Sasha could rescue her. Sasha is hoping to find her one day.
I know this is a long list of characters. There are even more in the books but none are as important as those listed above. As I continue in the series I will be mindful of the excessive characters and try to keep from adding any more secondary characters.
For all those readers who push through the excess and still enjoy the story, this is me giving you a big electronic **HUG**.